Waka Challenge Day 13: One start, two finishes

The other day, Beth Lowell wrote:

we watched the stars
falling through the morning sky

and invited our readers to finish the waka.

Stephen W. Leslie accepted the challenge:

we watched the stars
falling through the morning sky
A sudden light flash
Tremendous splash in the bay
In our faces…..astonishment

And so did budo adana:

stars
we watched the stars
falling through the morning sky
as our dog whimpered
eager to sniff the damp grass
to show us the way to ourselves

The Waka Challenge continues through May 9, 2010, so there's plenty of time for you to contribute a waka or two, or even part of one. Add it as a comment to this post on our web site, or email it to editor @ thereikidigest.com.